Dreaming- (Clara Attempts Poetry)

LilaAnn

Two blue eyes survey the world

in a way I cannot

understand

 

Two small hands touch everything,

inquisitive, wondering

 

She notices

the forgotten things,

small and unimportant,

to me.

 

So far away

in a world where only she

can be

 

Curious, she wanders on

 

barefoot

wide eyed

and dreaming

_________

Hello, everyone! This poem is about my littlest sister, Lila. (That picture is of her.) I’ve never written poetry before- so I would be VERY appreciative of feedback. ๐Ÿ™‚ It was fun to write, even though it isn’t the best! ๐Ÿ˜€

What did you think? Be sure to comment below. ๐Ÿ˜€ Sorry for a rather short post- I’ve got a much longer one coming soon. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Clara (2)

What’s on your minds? Unicorns? Writing? Chocolate? Mountain goats? XD Comment below and tell me! ๐Ÿ˜›

 

35 thoughts on “Dreaming- (Clara Attempts Poetry)

  1. It must be pretty good, because I usually can’t stand reading poetry, and I read this whole post! ๐Ÿ˜€ I don’t think it was bad at all. ๐Ÿ˜‰

    CutePolarBear
    P.S. You know what we did this week? We went to Ark Encounter! (see website here, if you don’t know what I’m talking about: https://arkencounter.com/) ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. That was a sweet poem, Clara! Lila sounds really cute. ๐Ÿ™‚
    I’m thinking about taking pictures. A family at church asked me to take a picture of them for their newsletter, and I’m really excited because I’ve never done anything like that before! I’m also thinking about our newly redecorated room and what to put on canvases above our beds… ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thank you, Allison! She is. ๐Ÿ™‚
      Oh, that’s so cool! You’ll do a great job. ๐Ÿ˜€
      Ooh… blank canvases…. ๐Ÿ˜ฎ XD That’s a hard one! ๐Ÿ˜›

      -Clara โค

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  3. Oh, I love this poem, Clara!! You did a great job! ๐Ÿ˜€
    Now I’m curious if you have blonde hair…. I understand if you can’t say ๐Ÿ˜‰
    What’s on my mind? Bridesmaids dresses!!! We spent the whole day shopping for one yesterday, but finally found one online that I absolutely love! I can’t wait!! ๐Ÿ˜€
    ~Jaclynn~

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    1. Thank you, Jaclynn!
      Hehe! ๐Ÿ˜› I have dark brown hair, actually! ๐Ÿ˜‰ Two of my sisters have blonde hair, though. ๐Ÿ˜€
      Wow, that’s so awesome!! I bet it’s gorgeous. ๐Ÿ™‚

      -Clara โค

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  4. I love your poem, Clara! It’s so sweet! ๐Ÿ™‚ What’s on my mind? Hm….I guess…fandom stuff… XD LOL! Great post!
    -Emma-

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